MANUNAM's game Reviews on Newgrounds

["...Abide With Me"]

It is an interesting experience.

I personally think it would be clearer and more interactive if you talked about the object you decide to leave with the mother and close the visit.

If the intention is that the player knows if Chapter 2 is another day, the same later or the same again, it would be good to add the date and time in addition to the year again. Anyway I find it interesting as it is.

marafrass responds:

Thanks for the kind words! I was hoping that subtitling the chapter with ”Reprise” would be enough to clarify that it’s the same day, but might still edit it.

[ANIMEMOS]

the music is great! it really make all work together!

[INTO THE ABYSS: REBORN]

nice game, I think is difficult to differentiate the backgrounds elements at times.

[Album Cover Parodies 2]

nice game.

the music could be improved, is a music game afterall.

when pressing the correct answer the game freezes a bit until the medal achievement appears, is a little annoying at times.

[Test: Cookie Eat]

the things that look finished are good, and the simple gameplay works.

dont know if it's just me, but the game is not centered, it's at the corner of the screen.

nice test, keep working

[Quest Helper]

the game is still very incomplete. but it seems to have potential.

deal with a smaller world, so you can better polish the details of the gameplay and then expand it, when you know it works.

At this time you lose yourself very easy, the water does not have any kind of hitbox, although is interesting that the "death" walks free.. it feel cheap that it kill you without warning and the quest in general do not feel like rewards at the end.

[Detiled]

nice concept, it need al little more polishing but it's going in the right direction.

keep up the good work

[Spacedust Defender - Reupload]

really good game! it keep me playing until the end!

the graphics and the music are good, but are really flat on the long run. a wider variety or special music for special events/levels could make wonders!

the ending need a bit more of work, is hard to get there and a nice reward like a little artwork o end credit music will be enough.

hopeslicer responds:

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it! :')

Yeah, I've learned my lesson about the ergonomic aspect of a game. I will not repeat the same mistake on the next project. :D